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Alone by ~dreamsofshadow:icondreamsofshadow:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Alone
This emptiness began to grow.
Once I left this World,
A meaning was lost forever.

I was not Lost from anyone.
No one ever Found me,
Cries were not Heard.
No one Called back
For me.

Not one visits my Humble grave
As these roots Grasp,
Enclose the story of my life.
Not one attends my Funeral;
I am Forsaken.

I never Felt that clasp of
Emanating warmth said to
Twine two, Forming one.
I know Nothing of Love.
There was nothing to Offer.
In these Lonely plains
I can only embrace Death.

Throughout these years,
To no one I let this Realization come
Not one I Dreamed of.
These words left Unspoken.
©2006-2009 ~dreamsofshadow
:icondreamsofshadow:

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Alone.

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~4HC2AZ0 Jan 11, 2006, 8:24:20 AM
very deep... awsome... i really liked this.. especially how u protrayed never loving

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And someday I know, No matter how hard we try,
We're all gonna have to, Lay down and die/
So maybe i should just tell you, What I hope and believe,
For every defeat, there will be a Victory/
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~dreamsofshadow Jan 13, 2006, 8:42:26 PM
Thanks. It just came out...kind of in the way that someone of that essence would think or say.

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Ceiling cat is watching you!
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~tenko72 Jan 21, 2006, 9:22:13 PM
This is really nice. It really captures the feeling hte loneliness very well. I especially like the last few lines.

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I am Pokemon #180 Flaaffy in DA's Pokemon Crew!
Icon by ~angelishi.
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~dreamsofshadow Jan 22, 2006, 4:00:51 PM
Thanks! ^___^
I hate the feeling of being alone.

Sorry for not being on gaia for a very long time. I have kind of grown tired of it, and Maple Story kept me so occupied for a while that I didn't go on here, either. I have also been quite busy.

And did you get your own computer?

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Ceiling cat is watching you!
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~tenko72 Jan 22, 2006, 6:59:21 PM
Your welcome!

Yeah, my dad got me a computer for Christmas. It's not new, but it works, so that's good.

What's Maple Story? I hear a lot about it, but I have no idea what it is.

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I am Pokemon #180 Flaaffy in DA's Pokemon Crew!
Icon by ~angelishi.
:icondreamsofshadow:
~dreamsofshadow Jan 23, 2006, 6:36:04 PM
That is cool! As long as it works ^___^. Just make sure not to fill up all of its memory space.

Maple Story...hmm, I'll just give you the link: [link]

It's a cool game that you can play with your friends.

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~tenko72 Jan 25, 2006, 4:33:34 PM
Thanks for the link, and the explanation.

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I am Pokemon #180 Flaaffy in DA's Pokemon Crew!
Icon by ~angelishi.
:icondreamsofshadow:
~dreamsofshadow Jan 25, 2006, 8:36:14 PM
Very velcome. Vith sqvishie oranges!

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~HalfPastMidnight1230 Mar 26, 2006, 4:33:49 AM
it captures it well, earlily well...
now i want to capture the pain of...
well, you'll see if you look sometime...

yes, i've been down that road.

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"Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm not sure about the former."- Albert Einstein
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